
Tier 4: Full Flight – Premium Manuscript Transformation
Full Deep-Dive Editorial Service
A comprehensive editorial experience that combines line editing, copy editing, and developmental editing in one seamless process.
Developmental Editing (Big Picture)
Story structure, plot progression, and character development
Thematic alignment, emotional beats, and conflict-resolution arcs
Genre-specific expectations and world-building consistency (especially for fantasy/sci-fi/historical fiction)
Line + Copy Editing (Sentence-Level Polish)
Improves pacing, tone, flow, clarity, and readability
Refines word choice, removes repetition, and enhances style
Fixes grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors
Ensures consistency in tense, POV, and formatting
Designed to elevate both the story and the sentence. Every word is carefully considered.
In-Line Comments + Tracked Edits
All edits delivered in Microsoft Word with Track Changes enabled
Margin comments offer context, ask questions, and explain changes so you’re empowered to revise
You'll never be left guessing why something was changed or suggested—transparency is key
Scene Flow Evaluation + Pacing Notes
Each scene is evaluated for:
Purpose within the narrative
Momentum and tension
Scene transitions and emotional resonance
Specific pacing notes identify where the story drags or rushes, with suggestions to rebalance action and reflection
Editorial Roadmap (Ideal for Series or Future Books)
A customized document outlining:
Key story arcs, unresolved threads, and sequel setup
Recurring stylistic strengths and blind spots
Notes on how your current manuscript fits into a broader series (if applicable)
Suggested goals for future drafts or books in your series
Especially helpful for authors planning a trilogy, duology, or extended universe.
Two Rounds of Edits (if needed)
Round 1: Full manuscript edit with detailed feedback
Round 2: A follow-up review of your revised manuscript (up to 30% rework)
Includes a second pass to tighten your revisions and check implementation
Final polish to ensure readiness for publishing or agent querying
Full Deep-Dive Editorial Service
A comprehensive editorial experience that combines line editing, copy editing, and developmental editing in one seamless process.
Developmental Editing (Big Picture)
Story structure, plot progression, and character development
Thematic alignment, emotional beats, and conflict-resolution arcs
Genre-specific expectations and world-building consistency (especially for fantasy/sci-fi/historical fiction)
Line + Copy Editing (Sentence-Level Polish)
Improves pacing, tone, flow, clarity, and readability
Refines word choice, removes repetition, and enhances style
Fixes grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors
Ensures consistency in tense, POV, and formatting
Designed to elevate both the story and the sentence. Every word is carefully considered.
In-Line Comments + Tracked Edits
All edits delivered in Microsoft Word with Track Changes enabled
Margin comments offer context, ask questions, and explain changes so you’re empowered to revise
You'll never be left guessing why something was changed or suggested—transparency is key
Scene Flow Evaluation + Pacing Notes
Each scene is evaluated for:
Purpose within the narrative
Momentum and tension
Scene transitions and emotional resonance
Specific pacing notes identify where the story drags or rushes, with suggestions to rebalance action and reflection
Editorial Roadmap (Ideal for Series or Future Books)
A customized document outlining:
Key story arcs, unresolved threads, and sequel setup
Recurring stylistic strengths and blind spots
Notes on how your current manuscript fits into a broader series (if applicable)
Suggested goals for future drafts or books in your series
Especially helpful for authors planning a trilogy, duology, or extended universe.
Two Rounds of Edits (if needed)
Round 1: Full manuscript edit with detailed feedback
Round 2: A follow-up review of your revised manuscript (up to 30% rework)
Includes a second pass to tighten your revisions and check implementation
Final polish to ensure readiness for publishing or agent querying
Ideal For:
Authors preparing to self-publish or submit to agents with a long or complex manuscript
Writers working on series, high fantasy, multi-POV epics, or memoirs with layered timelines
Those who want collaborative, high-level editorial input across both structure and style