Tier 4: Full Flight – Premium Manuscript Transformation

Full Deep-Dive Editorial Service

A comprehensive editorial experience that combines line editing, copy editing, and developmental editing in one seamless process.

• Developmental Editing (Big Picture)

  • Story structure, plot progression, and character development

  • Thematic alignment, emotional beats, and conflict-resolution arcs

  • Genre-specific expectations and world-building consistency (especially for fantasy/sci-fi/historical fiction)

• Line + Copy Editing (Sentence-Level Polish)

  • Improves pacing, tone, flow, clarity, and readability

  • Refines word choice, removes repetition, and enhances style

  • Fixes grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors

  • Ensures consistency in tense, POV, and formatting

Designed to elevate both the story and the sentence. Every word is carefully considered.

In-Line Comments + Tracked Edits

• All edits delivered in Microsoft Word with Track Changes enabled

• Margin comments offer context, ask questions, and explain changes so you’re empowered to revise

• You'll never be left guessing why something was changed or suggested—transparency is key

Scene Flow Evaluation + Pacing Notes

• Each scene is evaluated for:

  • Purpose within the narrative

  • Momentum and tension

  • Scene transitions and emotional resonance

• Specific pacing notes identify where the story drags or rushes, with suggestions to rebalance action and reflection

Editorial Roadmap (Ideal for Series or Future Books)

• A customized document outlining:

  • Key story arcs, unresolved threads, and sequel setup

  • Recurring stylistic strengths and blind spots

  • Notes on how your current manuscript fits into a broader series (if applicable)

  • Suggested goals for future drafts or books in your series

Especially helpful for authors planning a trilogy, duology, or extended universe.

Two Rounds of Edits (if needed)

• Round 1: Full manuscript edit with detailed feedback

• Round 2: A follow-up review of your revised manuscript (up to 30% rework)

  • Includes a second pass to tighten your revisions and check implementation

  • Final polish to ensure readiness for publishing or agent querying